|||2537|| s even more so.%29 12|1|0|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|JeanneHedge||10:58:06|08/08/2014|Wow%2C Mr Gryphon%27s been a busy fellow...%0D%0A%0D%0AActually reading it all will be the proof of the pudding%2C as the saying goes%2C but as others have noted just seeing the reorganization laid out makes me feel better about it all%2C it just makes so much sense%21%0D%0A%0D%0AInteresting how The Diqiu Suite is part of both The Legacy of Korra and The Order of the Rose %28bye%2C S5%21%29. You have links to Diqiu from both LoK and OotR%2C could we have links on the Diqiu homepage back to LoK and OotR%3F I don%27t see any - am I overlooking them somewhere%3F%0D%0A%0D%0AOther than the bits moved from Prelude to that S4 story%2C and the renaming of what%27s left of Prelude to Overture in A Minor%2C and the consolidation of several previously named stories into the Director%27s Cut%2C are the changes to the rest of what was formerly S5 pretty much title changes only%3F %28other than that%2C how was the play Mrs Lincoln%3F%29%0D%0A%0D%0ABordering on amusing%2Ffunny is the title of the %22next story%22 after Diqiu Suite in the OotR line%3A %22Technical Difficulties%22%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AJeanne%0D%0A%0D%0A%5Btable border%3D%220%22 cellspacing%3D%220%22 cellpadding%3D%220%22 width%3D%2280%25%22%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd align%3D%22center%22 width%3D%2210%25%22%5Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%2Fmisc%2Foldowl.jpg%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btd valign%3Dtop%5D%5Bfont size%3D2%5D%5Bb%5DJeanne Hedge%5B%2Fb%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont size%3D1%5D%5Blink%3Awww.jhedge.com%7Chttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%5D%0D%0A1st Courier of the Heavenly Prophets for %5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Awww.kickstarter.com%2Fprojects%2F326055564%2Ftianxia-blood-silk-and-jade%7CTianxia%5D%0D%0A%22Never give up%2C never surrender%21%22%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5B%2Ftable%5D 13|2|12|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Gryphon||11:56:51|08/08/2014|%3EInteresting how The Diqiu Suite is part of both The Legacy of Korra %0D%0A%3Eand The Order of the Rose %28bye%2C S5%21%29. You have links to Diqiu from %0D%0A%3Eboth LoK and OotR%2C could we have links on the Diqiu homepage back to %0D%0A%3ELoK and OotR%3F I don%27t see any - am I overlooking them somewhere%3F %0D%0A%0D%0AHmm.%0D%0A%0D%0ASo I forgot about that%2C and when you pointed it out I went and looked at the page to see if I could work a couple of discreet links into it without making too much of a mess. I wasn%27t really happy with any of my options there...%0D%0A%0D%0A... so%2C at long last%2C I finally went and learned how to use the %5Btt%5D%3Cmap%3E%5B%2Ftt%5D tag. %28This has been the month of new tools for me so far. It%27s a bit weird.%29 Just click on the titles of the things that are crossed over in the %5Bi%5DD%26igrave%3Bqi%26uacute%3B Suite%5B%2Fi%5D logo and you%27ll be whisked off to the appropriate base page.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3EOther than the bits moved from Prelude to that S4 story%2C and the %0D%0A%3Erenaming of what%27s left of Prelude to Overture in A Minor%2C and the %0D%0A%3Econsolidation of several previously named stories into the Director%27s %0D%0A%3ECut%2C are the changes to the rest of what was formerly S5 pretty much %0D%0A%3Etitle changes only%3F%0D%0A%0D%0AAs far as I can recall%2C yes. I%27ll be making a few small fixes to the earlier bits of OOTR as I record the audio%2C because I always run across some minor errors I missed before when I do that%2C but there have been no scene edits or other significant content changes.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3EBordering on amusing%2Ffunny is the title of the %22next story%22 after %0D%0A%3EDiqiu Suite in the OotR line%3A %22Technical Difficulties%22 %0D%0A%0D%0AHeh%2C that%27s actually a complete coincidence. That%27s what that story%27s been called since it was originally going to be a Mini. %28It%27s the %22B%27Elanna Joins the %5Bs%5DCorps%5B%2Fs%5DKlingon Navy%22 side story.%29%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 18|3|13|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|SpottedKitty||18:53:32|08/08/2014|%3E%3EBordering on amusing%2Ffunny is the title of the %22next story%22 after %0D%0A%3E%3EDiqiu Suite in the OotR line%3A %22Technical Difficulties%22 %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EHeh%2C that%27s actually a complete coincidence. That%27s what that story%27s %0D%0A%3Ebeen called since it was originally going to be a Mini. %28It%27s the %0D%0A%3E%22B%27Elanna Joins the %5Bs%5DCorps%5B%2Fs%5DKlingon Navy%22 side story.%29 %0D%0A%0D%0AHooboy%2C now that%27s going to be a real fasten-your-seatbelts wild ride. So many good stories have come out in the last little while I%27d forgotten all about where B%27Elanna went. Although... isn%27t there a brief scene somewhere of her talking to Utena about wanting to be involved in the Tau Ceti excitement%3F%0D%0A%0D%0AThinking back to her last bit of dialogue with Zargh%2C I hope she doesn%27t have to perform %5Bi%5Dtoo%5B%2Fi%5D much percussive maintenance on the crew...%0D%0A%0D%0A-- %0D%0AUnable to save the day%3A File is read-only. 19|3|13|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Gryphon||17:33:30|08/09/2014|[updated:LAST EDITED ON Aug-09-14 AT 05:34 PM (EDT)]%3E%3Eare the changes to the rest of what was formerly S5 pretty much %0D%0A%3E%3Etitle changes only%3F%0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EAs far as I can recall%2C yes. I%27ll be making a few small fixes to the %0D%0A%3Eearlier bits of OOTR as I record the audio%2C because I always run %0D%0A%3Eacross some minor errors I missed before when I do that%2C but there %0D%0A%3Ehave been no scene edits or other significant content changes. %0D%0A%0D%0A%5Bb%5DCorrection%3A%5B%2Fb%5D While recording the audio for %5Bi%5DAsh Knight%5B%2Fi%5D%2C I decided to tack the Mini-Story %5Bi%5DMatalde the Red%5B%2Fi%5D %28written four years after the fact%2C but set immediately afterward and pertaining to one of its key events%29 onto the movement as a post-credits sequence. Neither the movement nor the Mini have been significantly edited%2C I just spliced them together%2C and both text and audio now reflect this.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 20|4|19|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|JeanneHedge||23:01:32|08/09/2014|%3E%5Bb%5DCorrection%3A%5B%2Fb%5D While recording the audio for %5Bi%5DAsh Knight%5B%2Fi%5D%2C I %0D%0A%3Edecided to tack the Mini-Story %5Bi%5DMatalde the Red%5B%2Fi%5D %28written four %0D%0A%3Eyears after the fact%2C but set immediately afterward and pertaining to %0D%0A%3Eone of its key events%29 onto the movement as a post-credits sequence. %0D%0A%3ENeither the movement nor the Mini have been significantly edited%2C I %0D%0A%3Ejust spliced them together%2C and both text and audio now reflect this. %0D%0A%0D%0AThere%27s a code error in %5Bi%5DAsh Knight%5B%2Fi%5D. I think it%27s at the splice point where the mini went in - a %22%3C%22 sign is missing I think. Here%27s the code around that point to help you search it%3A%0D%0A%5Btt%5D%0D%0A%3Cp%3EAfter a moment%2C Shuten straightened and took his hand away from his side%2C and his eyes burned with an inner fire all their own.%3C%2Fp%3E%0D%0A%0D%0A%3Cp%3Ediv class%3D%22timestamp%22%3E%3Cp%3EFriday%2C February 19%2C 2410%3Cbr%3E%0D%0AAsgard%3C%2Fp%3E%0D%0A%0D%0A%3Cp%3ECorwin and Anne were eating breakfast and trying to figure out which of Asgard%27s sights to hit that day when there came a knock at the door.%3C%2Fp%3E%0D%0A%5B%2Ftt%5D%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AJeanne%0D%0A%0D%0A%5Btable border%3D%220%22 cellspacing%3D%220%22 cellpadding%3D%220%22 width%3D%2280%25%22%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd align%3D%22center%22 width%3D%2210%25%22%5Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%2Fmisc%2Foldowl.jpg%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btd valign%3Dtop%5D%5Bfont size%3D2%5D%5Bb%5DJeanne Hedge%5B%2Fb%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont size%3D1%5D%5Blink%3Awww.jhedge.com%7Chttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%5D%0D%0A1st Courier of the Heavenly Prophets for %5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Awww.kickstarter.com%2Fprojects%2F326055564%2Ftianxia-blood-silk-and-jade%7CTianxia%5D%0D%0A%22Never give up%2C never surrender%21%22%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5B%2Ftable%5D 21|5|20|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Gryphon||23:21:20|08/09/2014|%3EThere%27s a code error in %5Bi%5DAsh Knight%5B%2Fi%5D. I think it%27s at the splice %0D%0A%3Epoint where the mini went in%0D%0A%0D%0AThat%27s nowhere near the splice%2C but it was broken. I guess I%27m like Microsoft now and beta-test things by shipping them. Thanks.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 22|6|21|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|VoidRandom||04:11:04|08/10/2014|%3EThat%27s nowhere near the splice%2C but it was broken. I guess I%27m like %0D%0A%3EMicrosoft now and beta-test things by shipping them. Thanks. %0D%0A%0D%0AThink of it as encouraging community involvement.%0D%0A-VR %0D%0A%5Bfont size%3D%222%22%5D%E2%80%9CBut editors are still the world%27s readers. And thus the eyes of the world.%E2%80%9D %0D%0A%E2%80%95 Betsy Lerner%2C The Forest for the Trees%5B%2Ffont%5D %0D%0A 23|1|0|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|JeanneHedge||23:39:03|08/10/2014|Altered Appleseed isn%27t in the new chronology list. Removed in error or sent to the dust bin%3F%0D%0A%0D%0A%0D%0AJeanne%0D%0A%0D%0A%5Btable border%3D%220%22 cellspacing%3D%220%22 cellpadding%3D%220%22 width%3D%2280%25%22%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd align%3D%22center%22 width%3D%2210%25%22%5Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%2Fmisc%2Foldowl.jpg%5B%2Ftd%5D%5Btd valign%3Dtop%5D%5Bfont size%3D2%5D%5Bb%5DJeanne Hedge%5B%2Fb%5D%5Bbr%5D%5Bfont size%3D1%5D%5Blink%3Awww.jhedge.com%7Chttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.jhedge.com%5D%5Bbr%5D1st Courier of the Heavenly Prophets for %5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Awww.kickstarter.com%2Fprojects%2F326055564%2Ftianxia-blood-silk-and-jade%7CTianxia%5D%5Bbr%5D%22Never give up%2C never surrender%21%22%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%222%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D%221%22 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5B%2Ftable%5D 24|2|23|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Gryphon||23:47:38|08/10/2014|%3EAltered Appleseed isn%27t in the new chronology list. Removed in error %0D%0A%3Eor sent to the dust bin%3F %0D%0A%0D%0ABinned. Oh my Grodd%2C so utterly%2C utterly binned.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A%5Bfont size%3D%221%22%5DJust once%2C why can%27t somebody %5Bi%5Dnot notice%5B%2Fi%5D something like that%3F%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 25|3|24|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Peter Eng||04:17:29|08/11/2014|%3E%3EAltered Appleseed isn%27t in the new chronology list. Removed in error %0D%0A%3E%3Eor sent to the dust bin%3F %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EBinned. Oh my Grodd%2C so utterly%2C utterly binned. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3E--G. %0D%0A%3E%5Bfont size%3D%221%22%5DJust once%2C why can%27t somebody %5Bi%5Dnot notice%5B%2Fi%5D %0D%0A%3Esomething like that%3F%5B%2Ffont%5D %0D%0A%3E-%3E%3C- %0D%0A%0D%0ACan I notice long enough to applaud the removal%3F The script format grates on me in general%2C but it really bugs me here%2C because I%27m used to finding the stories in third-person%2C or the occasional first-person. I like the intent of Altered Appleseed%2C but the presentation was unappealing.%0D%0A%0D%0APeter Eng%0D%0A--%0D%0AAlso%2C I imagine you could write the story again%2C hit the most important plot points%2C %5Bb%5Dand%5B%2Fb%5D make it much better if you really needed to. 28|4|25|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Mercutio||10:33:29|08/13/2014|I wouldn%27t mind seeing an episode of %5Bi%5DLensman%3A The Brave and the Bold%5B%2Fi%5D produced in script format.%0D%0A%0D%0AThere%27s actually a trick to writing %5Bi%5Din%5B%2Fi%5D script if you%27re not actually writing %5Bi%5Da%5B%2Fi%5D script. Once you realize that%2C you can get a lot done with it%3B as a format%2C it is best deployed if you%27re writing something that%27s heavily dialogue-dependent with a lot of meta-humor in it%2C in which traditional prose transitions would actually get in your way and hinder the story.%0D%0A%0D%0AI%27d never try it for a serious piece%2C tho.%0D%0A%0D%0A-Merc%0D%0AKeep Rat 26|3|24|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Matrix Dragon||04:54:09|08/11/2014|%3EBinned. Oh my Grodd%2C so utterly%2C utterly binned. %0D%0A%0D%0A%2ADigs into the saved file collection.%2A Ah. That one...%0D%0A%0D%0ANo great loss.%0D%0A%0D%0AMatrix Dragon%2C J. Random Nutter 29|4|26|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|pjmoyer||10:45:50|08/13/2014|%3E%3EBinned. Oh my Grodd%2C so utterly%2C utterly binned. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3E%2ADigs into the saved file collection.%2A Ah. That one... %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3ENo great loss. %0D%0A%0D%0AThat was actually the script written by a film student in Olympus before the Olympus Fall%2FEarth Alliance Restructuring before the War of Corporate Occupation. Inexplicably%2C it got made into a made-for-TV movie%2C hence the major historical inaccuracies. It sometimes turns up on the late-late-late-late-night movie channel in various broadcast zones.%0D%0A%0D%0A--- Philip%0D%0A%0D%0A%5Btable%5D%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%223%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D2 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%0D%0A%5Btr%5D%5Btd width%3D%2265%22%5Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie.org%2F%7Eaerianne%2Ffoth.img%2Fgaia_ser_philip_saber.jpg%5B%2Ftd%5D%0D%0A%5Btd%5D%5Bfont color%3D%22%230000dd%22%5DPhilip J. Moyer%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont color%3D%22%230000aa%22 size%3D-2%5DContributing Writer%2C Editor and Artist %28and Moderator%29 -- Eyrie Productions%2C Unlimited%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont color%3D%22%230000aa%22 size%3D-2%5DCEO of MTS%2C High Poobah Of Artwork%2C and High Priest Of the Church Of Aerianne -- Magnetic Terrapin Studios%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont color%3D%22%230044aa%22 size%3D-1%5D%5Bi%5D%22Insert Pithy Comment Here%22%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont color%3D%22%230044aa%22 size%3D-1%5D%5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Amagnetic-terp-input.tumblr.com%7CFandoms%5D%5B%2Fi%5D -- %5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Amagnetic-terp-output.tumblr.com%7CFanart%5D%5B%2Fi%5D -- %5Bi%5D%5Blink%3Amagnetic-terp-converse.tumblr.com%7CFan Meta Discussions%5D%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Ffont%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%0D%0A%5Btd width%3D%2265%22%5Dhttp%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie.org%2F%7Eaerianne%2Ffoth.img%2Fgaia_aeri_coat_sword.jpg%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%0D%0A%5Btr%5D%5Btd colspan%3D%223%22%5D%5Bhr size%3D1 noshade%5D%5B%2Ftd%5D%5B%2Ftr%5D%5B%2Ftable%5D 27|1|0|||1||RE%3A A Less Minor Reorg|Mercutio||10:29:49|08/13/2014|You know%2C I think it was a year ago that I suggested that S5 should be re-organized on the grounds that it had wandered off-spec.%0D%0A%0D%0AI... didn%27t see something like this ever happening%2C tho.%0D%0A%0D%0AI applaud the curation%21 Curation is important%3B a lot of people don%27t bother and their stuff becomes a mess.%0D%0A%0D%0A-Merc%0D%0AKeep Rat