26||0|5174|0| 0|0|0|||1||TFLF 10|Gryphon||02:06:47|06/27/2015|To celebrate the fact that I gotta go have a dang MRI tomorrow%2C here%27s a little bonus on the day%3A the first lines of TFLF Chapter 10%2C %22Love Has No Brakes%22%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%5Bdiv style%3D%22border-color%3Ablack%3Bborder-style%3Asolid%3Bpadding%3A5px%22%5D%5Bfont face%3D%22times%22 color%3D%22black%22%5DAzusa Nakano was a bad person.%0D%0A%0D%0AShe had to assume this%2C because in the midst of this most dark and difficult of times for the Light Music Club%2C it suddenly dawned on her that she had never felt more happy or fulfilled in her entire life.%5B%2Ffont%5D%5B%2Fdiv%5D%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 1|1|0|||1||RE%3A TFLF 10|Peter Eng||02:19:59|06/27/2015|[updated:LAST EDITED ON Jun-27-15 AT 02:20 AM (EDT)]%5Bdiv style%3D%22border-color%3Ablack%3Bborder-style%3Asolid%3Bpadding%3A5px%22%5D%0D%0A%5Bfont face%3D%22times%22 color%3D%22black%22%5DAzusa Nakano was a bad person. %0D%0A%0D%0AShe had to assume this%2C because in the midst of this most dark and %0D%0Adifficult of times for the Light Music Club%2C it suddenly dawned on her %0D%0Athat she had never felt more happy or fulfilled in her entire %0D%0Alife.%5B%2Ffont%5D%5B%2Fdiv%5D %0D%0A%0D%0AI can understand why she%27d feel that way%2C though. The club is finally doing what she%27s always wanted. They%27re %5Bi%5Dgetting serious%5B%2Fi%5D about music.%0D%0A%0D%0APeter Eng%0D%0A--%0D%0AInsert humorous comment here. 2|1|0|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|TsukaiStarburst||12:10:34|06/27/2015|[updated:LAST EDITED ON Jun-27-15 AT 12:10 PM (EDT)]It was the worst of times%2C it was the best of times... 3|1|0|||1||RE%3A TFLF 10|Gryphon||02:29:32|07/01/2015|Dialogue fragment teaser%3A%0D%0A%0D%0A%22Ow%21 Hey%21 Non-violence%2C woman%21 We%27re Air Nomads%21%22%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 4|1|0|||1||RE%3A TFLF 10|Gryphon||15:22:35|07/02/2015|[updated:LAST EDITED ON Jul-02-15 AT 05:01 PM (EDT)]There you go.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 5|2|4|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|Droken||17:43:43|07/02/2015|-Damn-.%0D%0A%0D%0AThat was a fantastic episode. That%27s about all I%27m good for at the moment%2C since it%27s still processing. I%27ll probably have to reread it to get the full weight of it on board.%0D%0A%0D%0AActually%2C no%2C I do have one thing to say. I know this is only the second episode since the events of %5Bi%5DTaken By Storm%5B%2Fi%5D%2C and there is likely a good deal more to come%3B but as regards the handling of the HTT girls%27 entrance into the wider world that their teacher%28s%29 inhabit%3F In that sense%2C as in very many other%2C it has been -superbly- handled.%0D%0A%0D%0ABravo%2C sir. 10|3|5|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|drakensis||03:28:57|07/03/2015|Ayup.%0D%0A%0D%0AKate is not the only one crying. 6|2|4|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|Delusionist||19:03:31|07/02/2015|Who was Valerie Kitty Starr%3F 7|3|6|||1||RE%3A TFLF 10|Gryphon||19:07:56|07/02/2015|%3EWho was Valerie Kitty Starr%3F %0D%0A%0D%0AA friend of Matt%27s. See the annotations.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 8|3|6|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|BZArcher||19:50:29|07/02/2015|Someone wonderful. 9|2|4|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|mouse_rr||01:23:41|07/03/2015|the girls took a big step forward this go-round%2C possibly bigger than any of them realize. this chapter made everything they did up to this point seem like merely rehearsal and now its really show time. 11|1|0|||1||an aside|Gryphon||20:47:30|07/04/2015|I recognize that it%27s only a tiny cameo%2C but I%27m a little surprised that no one%27s found Iona%27s presence there worthy of remarking on. %3A%29%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 12|2|11|||1||RE%3A an aside|Nathan||21:36:45|07/04/2015|%3EI recognize that it%27s only a tiny cameo%2C but I%27m a little surprised %0D%0A%3Ethat no one%27s found Iona%27s presence there worthy of remarking on. %3A%29 %0D%0A%0D%0AWell%2C we saw Corwin adopt her%2C so it%27s not terribly surprising%2C is it%3F %5E_%5E%0D%0A%0D%0A-----%0D%0A%0D%0A%22V%2C did you do something foolish%3F%22%0D%0A%0D%0A%22Yes%2C and it was %5Bi%5Dglorious%5B%2Fi%5D.%22 14|3|12|||1||RE%3A an aside|Gryphon||22:01:06|07/04/2015|%3E%3EI recognize that it%27s only a tiny cameo%2C but I%27m a little surprised %0D%0A%3E%3Ethat no one%27s found Iona%27s presence there worthy of remarking on. %3A%29 %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EWell%2C we saw Corwin adopt her%2C so it%27s not terribly surprising%2C is it%3F %0D%0A%3E%5E_%5E %0D%0A%0D%0AGiven that the last time we saw her she was an Enemy Combatant%2C I would have thought it%27d be at least a %5Bi%5Dlittle%5B%2Fi%5D noteworthy%2C particularly since it%27s been all of a week.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 16|4|14|||||RE%3A an aside|Star Ranger4||22:57:53|07/04/2015|%3E%3EWell%2C we saw Corwin adopt her%2C so it%27s not terribly surprising%2C is it%3F %0D%0A%3E%3E%5E_%5E %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EGiven that the last time we saw her she was an Enemy Combatant%2C I %0D%0A%3Ewould have thought it%27d be at least a %5Bi%5Dlittle%5B%2Fi%5D noteworthy%2C %0D%0A%3Eparticularly since it%27s been all of a week. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0AYeah%2C but its %5Bb%5D%5Bi%5D%5Bu%5DCORWIN%5B%2Fu%5D%5B%2Fi%5D%5B%2Fb%5D. This sort of thing is what he does%2C darn it. Think back to Domon and Rain in Arena.%0D%0A%0D%0AAnd we saw him basicly evoke his powers on Iona%3B Especially with Touga being given his final curtain I see no reason for her not to have totally transfered her affection and loyalty to Corwin after that exhibition. 17|5|16|||1||RE%3A an aside|Gryphon||23:24:53|07/04/2015|%3EAnd we saw him basicly evoke his powers on Iona%3B Especially with Touga %0D%0A%3Ebeing given his final curtain I see no reason for her not to have %0D%0A%3Etotally transfered her affection and loyalty to Corwin after that %0D%0A%3Eexhibition. %0D%0A%0D%0AJust on a point of order%2C I%27m reasonably sure she didn%27t have any affection for Touga.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 18|6|17|||||RE%3A an aside|Star Ranger4||00:02:21|07/05/2015|%3E%3EAnd we saw him basicly evoke his powers on Iona%3B Especially with Touga %0D%0A%3E%3Ebeing given his final curtain I see no reason for her not to have %0D%0A%3E%3Etotally transfered her affection and loyalty to Corwin after that %0D%0A%3E%3Eexhibition. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EJust on a point of order%2C I%27m reasonably sure she didn%27t have any %0D%0A%3Eaffection for Touga. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%0D%0AI am complete agreement with you%2C cause... hey%2C %5Bb%5DTOUGA%5B%2Fb%5D. I was thinking more along the lines of her former assigned commander is now completely and totally defunct%2C ergo no possible conflicts in her transferring her feelings and loyalties etc to Corwin as her replacement CO%0D%0A 20|4|14|||||RE%3A an aside|drakensis||01:47:14|07/05/2015|%3EGiven that the last time we saw her she was an Enemy Combatant%2C I %0D%0A%3Ewould have thought it%27d be at least a %5Bi%5Dlittle%5B%2Fi%5D noteworthy%2C %0D%0A%3Eparticularly since it%27s been all of a week. %0D%0A%0D%0APrecisely. They%27ve had a _whole week_ to work on her. That%27s about how long it took to straighten Saionji out IIRC. 21|5|20|||1||RE%3A an aside|Gryphon||01:53:21|07/05/2015|%3EPrecisely. They%27ve had a _whole week_ to work on her. That%27s about how %0D%0A%3Elong it took to straighten Saionji out IIRC. %0D%0A%0D%0A%5Bb%5DN.B.%5B%2Fb%5D A different method will be required.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 24|4|14|||1||RE%3A an aside|Peter Eng||13:40:27|07/06/2015|%3E%3E%3EI recognize that it%27s only a tiny cameo%2C but I%27m a little surprised %0D%0A%3E%3E%3Ethat no one%27s found Iona%27s presence there worthy of remarking on. %3A%29 %0D%0A%3E%3E%0D%0A%3E%3EWell%2C we saw Corwin adopt her%2C so it%27s not terribly surprising%2C is it%3F %0D%0A%3E%3E%5E_%5E %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EGiven that the last time we saw her she was an Enemy Combatant%2C I %0D%0A%3Ewould have thought it%27d be at least a %5Bi%5Dlittle%5B%2Fi%5D noteworthy%2C %0D%0A%3Eparticularly since it%27s been all of a week. %0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%0D%0AAs I observed%2C she%27s just discovered God - or%2C more accurately%2C her god. If Corwin%27s position as god of Mecha doesn%27t specifically cover members of the Fleet of Fog%2C it%27s probably the closest match they%27ll have for a long time. %0D%0A%0D%0APeter Eng%0D%0A--%0D%0AInsert humorous comment here. 25|4|14|||||RE%3A an aside|SneakyPete||19:37:52|07/06/2015|A week%3F Geoff Depew was on his way to becoming SA7 in %2Aless than an hour%2A%2C if I%27m not mistaken... 13|2|11|||1||RE%3A an aside|SpottedKitty||21:59:04|07/04/2015|I noticed. Will we find out what happened to her between the end of %5Bi%5DTaken By Storm%5B%2Fi%5D and her appearance here%3F Obviously Corwin now trusts her not to attempt resuming hostilities%2C but how have the last few days affected her%3F%0D%0A%0D%0ACome to think of it%2C do we know how the loss of her ship might affect her%3F I don%27t think it came up in the Annotations thread.%0D%0A%0D%0A-- %0D%0AUnable to save the day%3A File is read-only. 15|3|13|||1||RE%3A an aside|Gryphon||22:14:46|07/04/2015|%3EI noticed. Will we find out what happened to her between the end of %0D%0A%3E%5Bi%5DTaken By Storm%5B%2Fi%5D and her appearance here%3F%0D%0A%0D%0AOh yes. I%27m not certain yet whether it will be part of Movement 6%2C or dealt with separately as an entr%27acte%2C but yes%2C that will be dealt with.%0D%0A%0D%0A%3ECome to think of it%2C do we know how the loss of her ship might affect %0D%0A%3Eher%3F I don%27t think it came up in the Annotations thread. %0D%0A%0D%0AWell%2C in the TV series%2C several Mental Models survived the sinking of their ship parts without any evident ill effects%2C other than being put out that they%27d lost most of their firepower. ... Well%2C and Hy%26%23363%3Bga seems to have gone insane%2C but I think she might%27ve been anyway. %3A%29%0D%0A%0D%0AThe Union Core %28the important-looking nexus-y bit that Corwin noticed inside Iona%29 is the only critical piece. Highlight the rest of this paragraph to see some spoilers. %5Bfont color%3D%22white%22%5DHeck%2C Kirishima survived both the sinking of her ship %5Bi%5Dand%5B%2Fi%5D the destruction of her Mental Model%27s body. The only reasons she has to spend most of the series as an animated teddy bear are a%29 for psy-ops purposes and b%29 because the writers thought it would be funnier. There%27s also evidence that Hy%26%23363%3B existed as a disembodied Union Core for some time between her sinking and the point at which she decided to construct a Mental Model%2C and Takao replaced her Mental Model after donating it%2C along with all the rest of her nanomaterial%2C to rebuild %5Bi%5DI-401%5B%2Fi%5D toward the end of the series.%5B%2Ffont%5D%0D%0A%0D%0ASo apart from possibly being traumatized by the way in which it was done - Corwin really didn%27t intend to be quite that rough%2C but he was a bit agitated - Iona shouldn%27t experience any lasting aftereffects from the sinking of %5Bi%5DI-401%5B%2Fi%5D%2C apart from the obvious inconvenient of not having it any more. %28Actually playing around with a bit that addresses that part this evening%2C a little.%29%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 22|4|15|||1||RE%3A an aside|SpottedKitty||02:27:06|07/05/2015|[updated:LAST EDITED ON Jul-05-15 AT 02:27 AM (EDT)]%3EWell%2C in the TV series%2C several Mental Models survived the sinking of %0D%0A%3Etheir ship parts without any evident ill effects%2C other than being put %0D%0A%3Eout that they%27d lost most of their firepower.%0D%0A%0D%0AWas that just sinking%2C as in mostly-intact-but-full-of-water-and-not-floating%2C or as happened to Iona%2C abruptly reduced to a pile of inactive nanomaterial%3F%0D%0A%0D%0AThanks for the spoiler info%2C you%27re going to make me go %22hmmm...%22 a lot until Iona%27s next appearance. %3A%29%0D%0A%0D%0A-- %0D%0AUnable to save the day%3A File is read-only. 23|5|22|||1||RE%3A an aside|Gryphon||02:35:41|07/05/2015|%3E%3EWell%2C in the TV series%2C several Mental Models survived the sinking of %0D%0A%3E%3Etheir ship parts without any evident ill effects%2C other than being put %0D%0A%3E%3Eout that they%27d lost most of their firepower.%0D%0A%3E%0D%0A%3EWas that just sinking%2C as in %0D%0A%3Emostly-intact-but-full-of-water-and-not-floating%2C or as happened to %0D%0A%3EIona%2C abruptly reduced to a pile of inactive nanomaterial%3F %0D%0A%0D%0AOh%2C yeah%2C sorry - sinking as in destruction%2C not actual submergence. %5Bfont color%3D%22white%22%5D%5Bi%5DHaruna%5B%2Fi%5D and %5Bi%5DKirishima%5B%2Fi%5D%2C for instance%2C ended up as big drifts of silver sand on a beach near Yokosuka%2C while Haruna turned up on the other side of a Haruna-shaped hole in a warehouse wall several miles away with Kirishima%27s Union Core in her pocket.%5B%2Ffont%5D Since their propulsion systems are gravity-manipulation-based%2C most Fog ships are%2C in fact%2C submersible%2C even if they don%27t represent ships that were in real life %28%5Bi%5DTakao%5B%2Fi%5D%2C for instance%2C lurks around submerged while her Mental Model goes book shopping at one point%29.%0D%0A%0D%0A--G.%0D%0A-%3E%3C-%0D%0ABenjamin D. Hutchins%2C Co-Founder%2C Editor-in-Chief%2C %26 Forum Mod%0D%0AEyrie Productions%2C Unlimited http%3A%2F%2Fwww.eyrie-productions.com%2F%0D%0Azgryphon at that email service Google has%0D%0A%5Bi%5DCeterum censeo Carthaginem esse delendam.%5B%2Fi%5D 19|2|11|||||RE%3A an aside|TsukaiStarburst||00:57:34|07/05/2015|I will admit to missing it entirely%2C much to my disgrace%2C but I%27m interested in seeing more context%21 26|1|0|||||RE%3A TFLF 10|Delusionist||18:58:19|11/06/2015|Well%2C that%27s annoying. Youtube is blocking the %22Singing%21%22 clip now in the United States.